Date: 2011-01-22 06:23 pm (UTC)
*whimpers* Oh wow, poor Helen! Poor Fivers! :(

This story's an excellent lead up to John and Helen's confrontation in Whitechapel! I love how you brought Mary Kelly to life, and connected her to the Sanctuary. I also love how you have Helen slowly beginning to develop the Sancutary network, making contacts among the more humanoid Abnormals and setting up safehouses and the like. Brilliant!

Oh, the revelation! I love how all four of them were devastated in their own way. Tesla may be a brat, but these are his friends, and he cares for them in his own way. Now to know that one of them is really a ruthless killer? :'(

Excellent story!
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