ext_55635 ([identity profile] marymc.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] grav_ity 2010-09-06 03:00 am (UTC)

Oh, sooooo lovely.... This is just gorgeous! It's so understated, and it takes its time, but it's definitely Olivia. I love how Peter thinks he's going nuts until he figures out whats going on. I was right there with him - excellent reference to the doorstop!

I also love the play on dark and light, and whether you meant it or not, Olivia's hair colour tied into that so well. It's a very Abrams conceit, actually. Is dark good and is light bad? And what happens when they change places?

Thanks again for writing this!

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